6.3 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon!
Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?
Sometimes I should give up something according to circumstance. I think there is a right time to give up and stop trying when we encounter something that we have to make a decision for that.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello MR. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your ideas regarding our essay. I also agree that there is a time to stop from trying. It doesn\'t mean that you are giving up. Instead, you are letting go of something that is not really meant for you. Anyway, you have a wonderful day.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?Sometimes I should give up something according to circumstance.
>> Sometimes I should give up something because of its circumstance.
I think there is a right time to give up and stop trying when we encounter something that we have to make a decision for that.>> i think there is a right time to give up and stop trying when we encounter. We have to make a decision for that.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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