6-3 lose to 6-6

2017-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Today,6th grade have a sport match.And all 6th grade student go to gym and watch the game and play the game.My classmate lose the first game and won the second game.But we lose the final game.Last team have to clean school.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I\'m sad to know that you lost in the final game.

I know your classmates did their best.

Cheer up!

See you on Tuesday!

_Teacher Dianne

Today,6th grade have a sport match. And all 6th grade student go to gym and watch the game and play the game.

>> The 6th graders had a sport match today and all the students went to the gym and watched how they played the game.

My classmate lose the first game and won the second game.

>> My classmates lost in the first game, but they won in the second game.

But we lose the final game.Last team have to clean school.

>> But then we lost in the final game and the last team had to clean the school.

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