6/30 homework
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I would explain the feeling and thought when we see green things.
She never watched color, so I don\'t have to define just color.
Most green things are fresh ones such as trees, vegetables, mountains.
So, when we think green, we can easily imagine trees or plants.
They give us food and house and have live.
We know they are the source of lives and nature.
We say that human comes from nature by birth and go back to nature after death.
When our stress level becomes very high, people often want to stay in nature.
Green with trees, plants, and flowers make us feel relax.
And they indeed provide us positive material as phytoncide.
It makes our body and brain to be clear and prevent bacteria damage.
So, we usually use green color to express fresh or positive feelings.
And walking symbol in the traffic light is also green color.
I want to give the blind person the feeling and emotion of green to remind it when they hear green.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That would be an interesting way to explain the color green to a blind person.^^
-Rachel
I would explain the feeling and thought when we see green things.
>> correct
She never watched color, so I don\'t have to define just color.
She never watched color, so I don\'t have to define just color.
>> She never saw the color, so I don\'t have to define it.
Most green things are fresh ones such as trees, vegetables, mountains.
Most green things are fresh ones such as trees, vegetables, mountains.
>> correct
So, when we think green, we can easily imagine trees or plants.
So, when we think green, we can easily imagine trees or plants.
>> correct
They give us food and house and have live.
They give us food and house and have live.
>> They give us food and house to live.
We know they are the source of lives and nature.
We know they are the source of lives and nature.
>> correct
We say that human comes from nature by birth and go back to nature after death.
We say that human comes from nature by birth and go back to nature after death.
>> correct
When our stress level becomes very high, people often want to stay in nature.
When our stress level becomes very high, people often want to stay in nature.
>> correct
Green with trees, plants, and flowers make us feel relax.
Green with trees, plants, and flowers make us feel relax.
>> correct
And they indeed provide us positive material as phytoncide.
And they indeed provide us positive material as phytoncide.
>> And they indeed provide us beneficial materials such as phytoncide.
It makes our body and brain to be clear and prevent bacteria damage.
It makes our body and brain to be clear and prevent bacteria damage.
>> It makes our body and brain clear and prevents bacterial damage.
So, we usually use green color to express fresh or positive feelings.
>> correct
And walking symbol in the traffic light is also green color.
And walking symbol in the traffic light is also green color.
>> correct
I want to give the blind person the feeling and emotion of green to remind it when they hear green.
I want to give the blind person the feeling and emotion of green to remind it when they hear green.
>> correct
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