6/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will video record with my smartphone this question.
I am a very eager person for education and research.
My education goal is talent cultivation for industrial, research, and academic fields.
I got first place in the lecture for undergraduate students.
I am very proud that I have been educated at the level of students\' eyes and my teaching has been recognized by them.
And my research goal is dry processing commercialization in the industrial field and become a top expert in the thermal plasma processing field in the world.
I got Ph.D. in the department of engineering and moved to Japan and worked in the department of science.
I realized and learned the difference between science and engineering, and I thought the best way of research is the combination of scientific view and engineering view.
Based on this realization, I recently published a paper in the top 5% of journals and the content is synthesis of functional material and the mechanism identification.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
This homework is not necessarily for writing it down but just for recording so you can listen to it and practice more, but since you wrote your answer, it is also fine.
-Rachel
I will video record with my smartphone this question..
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I am a very eager person for education and research.
I am a very eager person for education and research.
>> I am a person who is passionate or very eager about education and research.
My education goal is talent cultivation for industrial, research, and academic fields.
My education goal is talent cultivation for industrial, research, and academic fields.
>> My educational goal is to cultivate talents for industrial research and academic fields.
I got first place in the lecture for undergraduate students.
I got first place in the lecture for undergraduate students.
>> I got the first place award in the category for giving lecture to undergraduate students.
I am very proud that I have been educated at the level of students\' eyes and my teaching has been recognized by them.
I am very proud that I have been educated at the level of students\' eyes and my teaching has been recognized by them.
>> I am very proud that I was able to impart some things to my students and they recognize that.
And my research goal is dry processing commercialization in the industrial field and become a top expert in the thermal plasma processing field in the world.
And my research goal is dry processing commercialization in the industrial field and become a top expert in the thermal plasma processing field in the world.
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I got a Ph. D. in the department of engineering and moved to Japan and worked in the department of science.
I got a Ph. D. in the department of engineering and moved to Japan and worked in the department of science.
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I realized and learned the difference between science and engineering, and I thought the best way of research is the combination of scientific view and engineering view.
I realized and learned the difference between science and engineering, and I thought the best way of research is the combination of scientific view and engineering view.
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Based on this realization, I recently published a paper in the top 5% of journals and the content is synthesis of functional material and the mechanism identification.
Based on this realization, I recently published a paper in the top 5% of journals and the content is synthesis of functional material and the mechanism identification.
>> Based on this realization, I recently published a paper which is included in the top 5 % of journals and the content is about synthesis and functional material and the mechanism identification.
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