6.30 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! It'a raining here in Changwon. I just had a lunch. Did you Have a good lunch?
If your life had absolutely no limits and you could have it all and whatever you wanted, what would you choose to have and what would you choose to do?
If my life had absolutely no limits, it wouldn't be much fun in my life. If I can do like that I would choose to have health and make enough wealth. Of course, Ithink the value of health is above wealth.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homework.
Please review my corrections.
Anyway, you had a late lunch today.
I haven\'t eaten lunch yet. Thank you for asking.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
It\'a raining here in Changwon.
>> Correct.
I just had a lunch.
>> I just had lunch.
Did you Have a good lunch?
>> Correct.
*** haveIf your life had absolutely no limits and you could have it all and whatever you wanted, what would you choose to have and what would you choose to do?If my life had absolutely no limits, it wouldn\'t be much fun in my life.
>> If I have no absolute limits, my life wouldn\'t be much fun.
If I can do like that I would choose to have health and make enough wealth.
>> If I can do that, I would choose to have a good health and increase my wealth.
Of course, I think the value of health is above wealth.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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