6-30th Homework

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Modern people have a lot of food even if they aren\'t hungry.

>> Modern people have lots of food stored in there houses  even if they are not hungry.

Ancient people could not get plenty of food since they didn\'t have good tools or technique to enhance the production power of agriculture.

>> CORRECT

So, they always had to work to get the food for a whole day.

>> So they always have to work just to eat three times a day.

Although there was also another problem that they could not take amount of food, the main issues about the production power of agriculture were the techniques.

>> Although there were problems on the amount of food that they take, the main issues about the production power of agriculture were the techniques.

Nowadays, even if we work hard for a whole day but it is not directly related with getting the food.

>> Nowadays, even if we work hard for the whole day, we aren\'t paid of food to eat.

The purpose of our working is to earn the money that is a tool for us to buy the food.

>> The purpose of working is to earn money, in which we can use as a tool to buy our food. 

As the techniques and tools are developed more, the production power of agriculture also is also increased.

>> As the techniques and tools are developing more, the production power of agriculture has also increased.

In the market, we can easily but some eggs.

>> In the market, we can easily buy some eggs.

Many years ago, the eggs were very rare since amount of production was very small.

>> Many years ago, eggs were rare since the amount of production was very low.

Now, we are anxious about the egg\'s side effect like growth hormone that is fed to hens together feedstuff.

>> Now, we are anxious about the egg\'s side effects, like growth hormone that is fed to chickens.

I think obesity would become a big problem more.

>> I think obesity would become a bigger problem.