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2013-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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6 i'd like to have a closetwardrobe. i'd like to have hanger. i'd like to bed. (Bed did not remember the English name. So I did not answer.) ---------- A teller works in a bank and helps customers with their banking needs. The area where they work is called a teller (window) because there is usually a plate of glass between the customer and the teller. Some of the things a teller can help you with include (cashing) a check, telling you how much money you have in your (account), processing deposits and (withdrawals), etc. These days, tellers are not as (necessary) as they used to be, since many people do their banking (online) ( = on the internet). In fact, some banks actually (charge) you more money to speak to a real person! Since tellers (handle) a lot of money as part of their job, they are required to be (trustworthy). A teller should also have a strong attention to (detail).

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I really appreciate you for being so diligent! Keep up the wonderful performance! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ i\'d like to have a closetwardrobe.>> I\'d like to have a closet.i\'d like to have hanger.>> I\'d like to have a hanger.i\'d like to bed.>> I\'d like to have a bed.(Bed did not remember the English name. So I did not answer.)>> I couldn\'t remember the English vocabulary, so I couldn\'t answer.----------A teller works in a bank and helps customers with their banking needs. The area where they work is called a teller (window) because there is usually a plate of glass between the customer and the teller. >> Correct Some of the things a teller can help you with include (cashing) a check, telling you how much money you have in your (account), processing deposits and (withdrawals), etc. >> Correct These days, tellers are not as (necessary) as they used to be, since many people do their banking (online) ( = on the internet). >> Correct In fact, some banks actually (charge) you more money to speak to a real person! Since tellers (handle) a lot of money as part of their job, they are required to be (trustworthy). >> Correct A teller should also have a strong attention to (detail). >> Correct

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