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2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Last night, I attended my friend's birthday party. She doesn't have a pajama. I gave her pajamas. Marina thinks it will rain. One week. I go to the supermarket every weekend. Yes, I do. ---------------------- a - hold it b - hold the line c - hold up your end d - hold true e - hold still 1. Please _d__ ( = stay on the phone). He'll be with you in a second. 2. _b_! = Don't fidget!/ Don't move! 3. _a__! = Stop! 4. If you don't _c__ deal of the ( = if you don't do what you agreed to do), I'm not going to do what I promised either. 5. All the things I told you last year still ___e. ( = remain true)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름], Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today! You are such a thoughtful person. I\'m sure your friend loved your birthday present for her. Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ Last night, I attended my friend\'s birthday party.>> Correct She doesn\'t have a pajama.>> Correct I gave her pajamas.>> Correct Marina thinks it will rain.>> Correct One week.>> Correct I go to the supermarket every weekend.>> Correct Yes, I do.>> Correct a - hold itb - hold the linec - hold up your endd - hold truee - hold still1. Please _d__ ( = stay on the phone). He\'ll be with you in a second. >> Please _b - hold the line_ ( = stay on the phone). He\'ll be with you in a second. 2. _b_! = Don\'t fidget!/ Don\'t move! >> _e - hold still_! = Don\'t fidget!/ Don\'t move! 3. _a__! = Stop! >> Correct 4. If you don\'t _c__ deal of the ( = if you don\'t do what you agreed to do), I\'m not going to do what I promised either. >> Correct 5. All the things I told you last year still ___e. ( = remain true) >> All the things I told you last year still _d - hold true_. ( = remain true)

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