6-32th Homework
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Honestly, I have never heard of it.
In my head, I understand it why some one say like that.
But in my heart, I cannot understand the last thing that is "give your dinner to your enemy".
The last thing is literally very good words but I might do that.
If I met the enemy in the table, which it would be impossible, I would be very uncomfortable.
Jesus said, "love your enemy".
But I don's agree with it, it's because I am not a great human.
I think such like a behavior would be shown if one is normal persons.
Even if I hate my enemy, I could not retaliate one easily, which is also the attitude of the normal persons.
In the whole world, if there are fulled with love, it would be very good.
In the whole world, if there are no hate each people, we could live without any danger.
But we are humans who have their desire, and we try to carry out it anyway.
Some one would fail or some one would be success.
In this processing, people might hate some one with jealousy.
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Hi [이름]!
This is another engaging piece. It was a good read.
Cheers!
Teacher Jean
In my head, I understand it why some one say like that.
But in my heart, I cannot understand the last thing that is \"give your dinner to your enemy\".
Honestly, I have never heard of the saying \"give your dinner to your enemy.\" My logical mind understands the meaning but deep inside, I don\'t fully comprehend what the maxim is trying to impart.
The last thing is literally very good words but I might do that.
This is a meaningful saying but it isn\'t easy to follow it in reality.
If I met the enemy in the table, which it would be impossible, I would be very uncomfortable.
For instance, it would make me very uncomfortable to face my enemy across the table.
Jesus said, \"love your enemy\".
Jesus said, \"love your enemy.\"
But I don\'s agree with it, it\'s because I am not a great human.
I think such like a behavior would be shown if one is normal persons.
But I don\'t believe in this proverb because it\'s human nature to hate your enemy. I guess this makes me human.
Even if I hate my enemy, I could not retaliate one easily, which is also the attitude of the normal persons.
However, just because I hate my enemy doesn\'t mean that I can hurt or retaliate easily.
In the whole world, if there are fulled with love, it would be very good.
In the whole world, if there are no hate each people, we could live without any danger.
The world would be a better place if it is filled with love or hate doesn\'t exist. We could all live in peace.
But we are humans who have their desire, and we try to carry out it anyway.
Some one would fail or some one would be success.
In this processing, people might hate some one with jealousy.
But then again, it\'s human nature to love, hate, be jealous, or to be full of desire. Humans are imperfect. We will continue to make mistakes and follow the same vicious cycle.
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