6-33th Homework

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I changed a old computer into a new one.

>> I changed my old computer into a new one.

Actually, I didn\'t use it so much when I stayed at home.
>> Actually, I didn\'t use it that much when I stayed at home.

I already use the computer in the office, so I don\'t arise a desire to use it.

>> I am already using a computer in the office, so I don\'t have the desire to use it.

I don\'t care about the computer whether it goes well or not.

>> I don\'t care about the computer whether it is working well or not.

However, my children and wife have a different thought about it.

>> CORRECT

In the case of my children, the only place that they can use the computer is a home.

>> In case of my children, the only place that they can use the computer is at home.

If the computer break down, they could not use it.

>> If the computer breaks down, they could not use it.

So, whenever there are errors during using the computer, they often protested that the computer has to be changed into a new on.

>> So, whenever there are errors while the computer, they often protest that the computer has to be changed into a new one.

I think it was not bad when it use at home, and it was not so much older.

>> I think it was not bad when it is used at home, and it was not so old.

And I changed it 4 years ago.

>> I changed my computer 4 years ago.

But there were often errors during using it, and I had to fix it by myself.

>> There were errors when I use the computer and I have to fix it myself.

So, I decided that I bought a new one.

>> So, I decided to buy a new one.

The previous computer was a desktop computer but the new one was an all-in-one computer.

>> CORRECT

 So, it is very simple it\'s because there are no lines except for the power line.

>>  My new computer is very simple because it has no cables except the power line.