6-34th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It's interesting but I might not do anything.
Sometimes, I'm very conservative.
The person who already passed away cannot be return back in real life, I think.
I think it could not happen.
But if I have to bring some one in present or past, it would be very difficult to select some one.
I will back myself into past, it's because I want to see the real blue sky without a lot of dust in the air.
When I saw some pictures which was several decades ago, I could see the transparent blue sky in the pictures.
So, I really want to see that sky and I want to see the star in the dark night.
Nowadays, I could not see the stars in the night, it's because there are several reasons.
There is so many dusts in the air and there is a lot of light in the night.
So, even if the weather is fine, I could see starts.
Therefore, if I have an opportunity to bring some one to present or past, I would bring myself to past in order to see the real blue sky and stars.
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Hi [이름]!
This is one interesting topic that you wrote.
Please find the corrections below.
Teacher Jean
It\'s interesting but I might not do anything.
Sometimes, I\'m very conservative.
Even though I find something interesting, I still tend to be cautious in my actions. Maybe this is due to my being conservative.
The person who already passed away cannot be return back in real life, I think.
I believe that someone who passed away cannot come back to life.
I think it could not happen.
I think there is no likelihood for a dead person to come back to life.
But if I have to bring some one in present or past, it would be very difficult to select some one.
But if I were given the chance to bring someone back to life, it would be a very difficult decision to choose the right person.
I will back myself into past, it\'s because I want to see the real blue sky without a lot of dust in the air.
However, I would want to go back to the past if only to experience a better and cleaner environment where I can enjoy a clear blue sky without being exposed to air pollution.
When I saw some pictures which was several decades ago, I could see the transparent blue sky in the pictures.
I have seen some photos of clear blue sky taken several decades ago.
So, I really want to see that sky and I want to see the star in the dark night.
So, I really want to see the stars in that kind of night sky.
Nowadays, I could not see the stars in the night, it\'s because there are several reasons.
There is so many dusts in the air and there is a lot of light in the night.
Nowadays, I could not see the stars in the night due to several reasons.
For one, there is so much dust in the air and for another, we are surrounded by lights coming from buildings or skyscrapers.
So, even if the weather is fine, I could see starts.
As a result of the said air pollution and artificial lights, I still can\'t see the stars in the night sky even if the weather is fine.
Therefore, if I have an opportunity to bring some one to present or past, I would bring myself to past in order to see the real blue sky and stars.
Therefore, If I have an opportunity to time travel, I would travel to the past to enjoy the blue sky and do some stargazing.
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