6-35th Homework
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Many people including me are used to have certainly a trust about large businesses, even if there is no evidence about the trust.
I think they would give the trust since it is the reason why it is large business simply.
That's the reason why the big company's business have more opportunity than small company.
We live in the capitalism society, so we believe the money without any doubt.
Therefore, many business persons try to make a big deal to increase the probability of the business success and even if it is not big, they would pretend to be a big business.
In large business there are some advantages that could not carry out it as small business.
Large business could make a big investment and it would easily enhance some business area that was underdeveloped.
Some area is needed such a big investment.
Anyway, many people want to buy some appliances of the big company that they already give to the trust.
Even if the big company rise the price, customers would give some trust.
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That\'s the reason why the big company\'s business have more opportunity than small company.
We live in the capitalism society, so we believe the money without any doubt.
Therefore, many business persons try to make a big deal to increase the probability of the business success and even if it is not big, they would pretend to be a big business.
In large business there are some advantages that could not carry out it as small business.
Large business could make a big investment and it would easily enhance some business area that was underdeveloped.
Some area is needed such a big investment.
Anyway, many people want to buy some appliances of the big company that they already give to the trust.
Even if the big company rise the price, customers would give some trust.
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Many people including me are used to have certainly a trust about large businesses, even if there is no evidence about the trust.
>> Many people, including me, instinctively trust major companies even if the said trust is not earned nor proven.
I think they would give the trust since it is the reason why it is large business simply.
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Almost everyone assume that large businesses can be trusted due to the fact that they are such successful companies and owing to their size. That\'s the reason why the big company\'s business have more opportunity than small company.
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As a result, these major businesses have more opportunities than smaller companies.
We live in the capitalism society, so we believe the money without any doubt.
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We live in a capitalist society so most of us are very much money-oriented. Therefore, many business persons try to make a big deal to increase the probability of the business success and even if it is not big, they would pretend to be a big business.
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Therefore, many businessmen focus on increasing the probability of their venture\'s success and make it appear that their undertaking has gained a favorable outcome regardless of the result. In large business there are some advantages that could not carry out it as small business.
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Large businesses have its own downside as there are things that smaller companies can carry out better. Large business could make a big investment and it would easily enhance some business area that was underdeveloped.
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One advantage of major corporations over smaller ones though is that they can afford to make big investments and easily enhance underdeveloped areas. Some area is needed such a big investment.
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Some areas are in need of such sizable investment. Anyway, many people want to buy some appliances of the big company that they already give to the trust.
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Anyway, many people prefer to buy the products of big companies that have become household names which made them seem trustworthy. Even if the big company rise the price, customers would give some trust.
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Customers would still buy the products of such major businesses regardless of the price.
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