6-36th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
That\'s enthusiastic, Sir [이름]!
Your dynamic personality would decode everything you\'re aiming for. With all these boosters, the most important thing is your confidence. Everything starts in you. See you!~.~
~Teacher Eunice
I think the best thing that my ability can be boosted is to live with some persons who speak English only in a whole day.
>>> I think the best thing that my ability can be boosted is to live with people who speak English every day.
>>> I think the best thing that could boost my ability to communicate in English well is to engage in a daily conversation.
I want to largely enhance my ability but I need a lot of time to do it.
>>> Correct!
The enhancement of my ability would not be carried out without a lot of time.
>>> Correct!
So, I want to live and to speak along with a native speaker for some days.
>>> Correct!
>>> I would like to live and communicate with the native speakers of English.
If so, I think my ability would be enhances even if it would be little.
>>> If so, I think my ability would be enhanced even if it would be little.
After returning back to a business trip abroad, I felt the enhancement of my ability that was different from taking the trip before.
>>> After returning back from a business trip abroad, I felt that the enhancement of my ability was different before taking the trip.
It\'s because I had to use only English.
>>> It was because I only had to use English.
From feeling it, I hope a chance that is to speak only English for some days without speaking Korean.
>>> I am hoping to be able to speak in English fluently someday without speaking Korean.
Many English teacher said, if you want to enhance your ability, you have to polish your skill everyday.
>>> Many English teachers said that if you want to enhance your ability, you have to polish your skill every day.
Many Koreans who fluently speak English would devote to their skill boost-up so many times.
>>> Many Koreans who fluently speak English would devote to boost their skill so many times.
I think I was not devoted to it enough time such like that until now.
>>> I think I am not devoted to it because I\'m lacking enough time to study well.
So, if I have a chance, I would take it.
>>> Correct!
>>> If I would have a better chance to further enhance my English skill then I would do what it takes to achieve my goal.
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