6-37th Homework

2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Don

학생이 쓴 원문

Basically, I'm not any side on, too. I agree that human can eat everything and have to eat everything for health. We have already studied about the nutrition of food. In the nutrition of food, out body always requires the necessary material and we get it almost from the food whether it is a meat or not. Someone say the vegetable is a good food for humans, and someone say the livestock is a proper food for using muscles. Actually, I don't like eat the meat everyday, and I like to eat several vegetables. However, I sometimes eat the meat for my health. When I was younger, I never had the meat. It's because I didn't like it and there was not any reason. Nowadays, I know about the nutrition that I can get from the meat and then I have started to eat some meat. But I still don't like it. I think human is not a herbivore which eat only the grass and not a carnivore which eat only the meat. So, out body always needs various nutrition from several things.

강사 첨삭

HI [이름]!

I\'m glad that you want to be healthy. Keep on eating fruits and vegetables and exercise a lot so that you can see the result! I believe you can do it!

Basically, I\'m not any side on, too.

>> I\'m not on the either side of the argument.

I agree that human can eat everything and have to eat everything for health.

>> I agree that humans can eat anything just to stay healthy.

We have already studied about the nutrition of food.

>> CORRECT

In the nutrition of food, out body always requires the necessary material and we get it almost from the food whether it is a meat or not.

>> In food nutrition, our body requires the necessary vitamins and minerals that we get from different kinds of food whether it is a meat or not.

Someone say the vegetable is a good food for humans, and someone say the livestock is a proper food for using muscles.

>> Somebody said that vegetables are good for humans and live stocks are good for our muscles.

Actually, I don\'t like eat the meat everyday, and I like to eat several vegetables.

>> Actually, I don\'t like to eat meat every day and I like to eat vegetables.

However, I sometimes eat the meat for my health.

>> However, I sometimes eat meat for my health.

When I was younger, I never had the meat.

>> When I was younger, I never had meat.

It\'s because I didn\'t like it and there was not any reason.

>> It\'s because I didn\'t like to eat meat and there was no other reason.

Nowadays, I know about the nutrition that I can get from the meat and then I have started to eat some meat.

>> Nowadays, I know the nutrition that I can get from eating meat and now I have started to eat meat.

But I still don\'t like it.

>>CORRECT

I think human is not a herbivore which eat only the grass and not a carnivore which eat only the meat.

>> I think humans are not herbivores that only eats grass and humans are not carnivores that only eats meat.

So, out body always needs various nutrition from several things.

>> Our body needs various nutrition from different sources of food.

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