6-38th Homework

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The internet that has a lot of the advantages is a very useful tool.

>>The internet has a lot of advantages. It is a very useful tool.
 Even though it was invented to use in the U.S Army, after opening to the people it would become more powerful.

>>Even though it was invented for the U.S Army to use, it was open for people to access and it has become powerful.
Many years ago, when we wanted to know about the fact that happened abroad, we had to wait sometimes until some media reported it.
>>Many years ago, when we wanted to know about facts and stories of other countries, we had to wait until it would be reported through the media

Whenever we found some knowledge or information, we often used the library to find it.

>>Whenever we had to look for information we had to go to the library to search for it.

Nowadays, if you can use a computer that is connected to the internet, you could find anything that you want.

>>Nowadays, if you know how to use a computer that\'s connected to the internet, you could find anything you want.
 There are also some disadvantages.

>>CORRECT

OR>>There are also some cons to this.
 All thing in the world is like to a coin that has a front and back side.

>>Everything in the world is like a coin that has two sides.
 So, if it has a merit, it would be a fault.

>>So if there is a positive side, there would also be a negative side.
 Since the internet is a good tool to solve some problems that I have, but there are also some faults.

>>Since the internet is a good tool to solve some problems that I have, there are also some disadvantages.
 Even though it have some faults, we have to focus on the merit of the internet.

>>Even though it has some disadvantages, we have to focus on the advantages the internet has.
 And when we use the internet, there are several cautions.

>>And when we use the internet we have to be cautious.
 I think the first thing that we have to do is not to give too much the trust to the internet.

>>I think the first thing we have to put into our minds is not to rely on the internet too much.