6-39th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HI CHARLES. GREAT OPINION ABOUT LOVE & RELATIONSHIPS!
FIRST IMPRESSIONS DO MATTER! THIS IS GREAT! :)
Whenever we see the opposite sex, we could not know all about someone.
>>Whenever we see someone of the opposite sex, we would not know everything or anything about them right away.
The easiest thing that we can know is the first sight, it would be an appearance.
>>The first thing we notice from first glace is, appearance.
I think the first sight is important but we have to contemplate the real.
>>I think the first impression is important but we have to contemplate on what is real.
To deeply know about one, we must have a lot of talk for a long time.
>>To deeply know everything about someone, we must communicate with them for a long time.
However, even though the first sight was bad, it would be difficult to have a long time to know each other.
>>However, if the first impression was bad, it would be hard to communicate for you to know each other.
If we see it in this point of view, the first sight is important.
>>In my opinion, the first impression is important.
Love doesn\'t last long if each other doesn\'t try to keep a good relationship.
>>Love won\'t last long if both persons won\'t try to have a good relationship.
I think Love is the relationship.
>>I think love is what makes the relationship.
Even if the first sight is very good, if they don\'t attempt to get well, it would deteriorate.
>>Even if the first impression is good if they don\'t try to have a good relationship, it will end.
The first thing that we keep the good relationship is to honor each other.
>>The first thing that we do to keep the relationship good is to respect each other.
Whenever we are talking about everything, if we honor the opponent, we could get an honor from others, too.
>>Whenever we are talking, if we honor one another, people will honor us too.
Specially, in the relation between lovers honor is key point that the relationship could be kept it a long time.
>>Specially, in the relationship between lovers, respect is the key to a long relationship.
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