6-3rd Homework

Hello there [이름]! 

Thank you for writing this nice essay. 

I\'ve heard about this movie from some of my students. 

It sounds really interesting. 

I hope I\'d get the chance to watch it. 

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. 
Stay warm and safe. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]    

What do you think about the after-death world?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> What do you think about the world after death?
Recently, a movie that deals with the after-death is very popular in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A movie that deals with the after-death recently became very popular in Korea.

Many people watch it so that the accumulated number of people who watch is over 10 million.

>> Many people watched it and the number is over 10 million.
I saw it with my family, too.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I watched it with my family as well.
The after-death in the movie is based on the eastern ideology.

>> The after-death concept in the movie was based on the eastern ideology.
Actually, I don\'t know how to say the eastern ideology.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I actually don\'t know how to express that eastern ideology.
An oriental ideology that I have already known maybe include the disgraceful meaning.

>> [Do you mean]: The oriental ideology that I have already known may have a bad meaning.

Anyway, in the movie the after-death is described to be spectacular.

>> Anyway, in the movie the after-death was described to be spectacular.

In Korea, if one goes away, one has to cross the death river through a boat.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In Korea, when someone dies, that person has to cross the death river using a boat.
And the judge that is to decide whether one is guilty or not will be held for 47 days.

>> The judge who is to decide whether one is guilty or not will detain/hold that person for 47 days.
One will go a hell or heaven whether one is guilty or not.

>> One will go to hell or heaven depending whether he/she is guilty or not.
The hell is diverse and the hell that the dead one goes will be determined by the sin.

>> Hell is a diverse place and the type of hell that the dead one goes to will be determined by the sin.
The judge will be held through 7 times.

>> [Do you mean]: The judging will happen seven times.
The after-death in the eastern is different with the western.

>> The after-death in the east is different with the west.
In the western, the heaven or hell is based on the catholic.

>> In the western area, heaven or hell is based on the Catholic belief.