6.4 H.W !
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강사 첨삭
Good morning, Lyn! Thank you for doing today\'s homework. This is a very good practice for you. Keep up the good work! ~ Teacher Elisha
Homework for today: Which hobbies are the most popular in your country? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
=> The most popular hobbies in my country is depended on generation, sexual and a period.
>> The most popular hobbies in my country varies by generation, gender and season.
But I know popular it is camping.
>> But I know that camping is popular.
Many People play camping, They\'ve been went to near by small mountain or camping town in
the big city that made only for camping activity.
>> Many people go camping. They go to nearby mountains or go to a camping town which is especially made for camping in a big city.
There are so many camping site than i think about it.
>> There are so many camping sites I can think about.
Probably It seems exectly answer for the question \'popular hobbies\'.
>> It\'s probably the answer for the question about popular hobbies.
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