6/4 HOMEWORK

2018-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you think diets are useful or not Have you ever tried to go on a diet What kind of diet was it? Did it work? I am always doing diet. I small food and took medicine. But always fail. Maybe I never drinking. but it`s diffcult.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for your answer.

A healthy person doesn\'t mean that you have a good body shape.

It means you have a complete physical, mental, and social well being

and not merely the absence of disease. I hope you maintain your healthy lifestyle. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I am always doing diet. 

>> I am always on a diet.
I small food and took medicine.

But always fail.

>> I eat small amount of food and I take a medicine but I always fail.
 Maybe I never drinking. but it`s diffcult.

>> Maybe I just can\'t stop drinking.

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