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Q:What kind of punishment have you received at school or home? Do you believe in physical punishment?
A:I have had some kinds of punishment from my parents as well as from my teacher. Reasons why I got it are different, I cannot remember what exactly I did it. But There is something I remind, it was happened in my elementary school. I reported my homework lastly, so my teacher got annoying. She touched my hair like pushing, that moment I felt so suck.
Also I don't agree that we stay in punishment physically, cuz I know that it is harmful for person who got it. Even in mood.
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Hi there Won!
I don\'t agree in corporal punishment at home and in school but I believe that positive reinforcement is needed. Thanks for doing your homework. Talk to you later!
~T. Lynn
I have had some kinds of punishment from my parents as well as from my teacher.
>> correct!
Reasons why I got it are different, I cannot remember what exactly I did it.
>> There are different reasons why I got it. I cannot remember exactly what I did.
But There is something I remind, it was happened in my elementary school.
>> But there is something I remember, it happened when I was in elementary.
I reported my homework lastly, so my teacher got annoying.
>> I passed my homework late so my teacher got annoyed.
She touched my hair like pushing, that moment I felt so suck.
>> She touched my hair/head like pushed me lightly.
Also I don\'t agree that we stay in punishment physically, cuz I know that it is harmful for person who got it. Even in mood.
>> I don\'t agree in physical/corporal punishment \'cause I know it\'s very harmful for the person who gets it. It cannot only harm him/her physically but also emotionally.
I don\'t agree in corporal punishment at home and in school but I believe that positive reinforcement is needed. Thanks for doing your homework. Talk to you later!
~T. Lynn
I have had some kinds of punishment from my parents as well as from my teacher.
>> correct!
Reasons why I got it are different, I cannot remember what exactly I did it.
>> There are different reasons why I got it. I cannot remember exactly what I did.
But There is something I remind, it was happened in my elementary school.
>> But there is something I remember, it happened when I was in elementary.
I reported my homework lastly, so my teacher got annoying.
>> I passed my homework late so my teacher got annoyed.
She touched my hair like pushing, that moment I felt so suck.
>> She touched my hair/head like pushed me lightly.
Also I don\'t agree that we stay in punishment physically, cuz I know that it is harmful for person who got it. Even in mood.
>> I don\'t agree in physical/corporal punishment \'cause I know it\'s very harmful for the person who gets it. It cannot only harm him/her physically but also emotionally.
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