6.4 homework
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[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you prefer watching
them on TV or going to the stadium? Describe in details what makes you enjoy watching sports.
I prefer to watch sports on TV rather than going to the stadium.
I can sit back or lie down on the couch in comfort that\'s why i can focus on the only play without any disruption.
Most korean used to go to the eatery that serves chicken and beer or alcohol in order to enjoy watching live sports while grabbing some food.
I can see many people who rooting for the team they like and they would meet them there but they show us korean\'s only unity.
It looks interesting. Anyway, i also love grabbling chicken and beer watching them on TV anywhere, at home or eatery.
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Cheers!
Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you prefer watching them on TV or going to the stadium? Describe in details what makes you enjoy watching sports.
I prefer to watch sports on TV rather than going to the stadium.
>> I prefer to watch sports on TV rather than to go to the stadium.
I can sit back or lie down on the couch in comfort that\'s why i can focus on the only play without any disruption.
>> I can sit back or lie down on the couch in comfort that\'s why I can focus only on the game without any disruption.
Most korean used to go to the eatery that serves chicken and beer or alcohol in order to enjoy watching live sports while grabbing some food.
>> Most Koreans go to an eatery that serves chicken and beer or alcohol in order to enjoy watching sports live on TV while grabbing some food.
I can see many people who rooting for the team they like and they would meet them there but they show us korean\'s only unity.
>> I can see many people rooting for the team they like, and they would meet them after the game. [I don\'t understand the contrast in the last part of the sentence.]
It looks interesting. Anyway, i also love grabbling chicken and beer watching them on TV anywhere, at home or eatery.
>> It looks interesting. Anyway, I also love grabbing chicken and beer then watching a game on TV anywhere, be it at home or eatery.
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you prefer watching them on TV or going to the stadium? Describe in details what makes you enjoy watching sports.
I prefer to watch sports on TV rather than going to the stadium.
>> I prefer to watch sports on TV rather than to go to the stadium.
I can sit back or lie down on the couch in comfort that\'s why i can focus on the only play without any disruption.
>> I can sit back or lie down on the couch in comfort that\'s why I can focus only on the game without any disruption.
Most korean used to go to the eatery that serves chicken and beer or alcohol in order to enjoy watching live sports while grabbing some food.
>> Most Koreans go to an eatery that serves chicken and beer or alcohol in order to enjoy watching sports live on TV while grabbing some food.
I can see many people who rooting for the team they like and they would meet them there but they show us korean\'s only unity.
>> I can see many people rooting for the team they like, and they would meet them after the game. [I don\'t understand the contrast in the last part of the sentence.]
It looks interesting. Anyway, i also love grabbling chicken and beer watching them on TV anywhere, at home or eatery.
>> It looks interesting. Anyway, I also love grabbing chicken and beer then watching a game on TV anywhere, be it at home or eatery.
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