6-40th Homework

Hi [이름]! Once again, these are incredible topics. I don\'t know where to start. But all I can say is keep your sentences straight to the point and short if needed. So it will be simple. But again, they\'re great. Keep them coming! :)    

In living my life, we might get several chances that we are able to earn a lot of money.

>>In my life, we\'ve only had several chances to earn a lot of money.
 However, we don\'t catch it or we don\'t know it was at that time.
>>However, we didn\'t properly spend it because we didn\'t know how it was at the time.
A wise person says that a person who wants to get a chance has to prepare something for it every instant.

>>A wise person says that a person who wants to get this chance should be ready for it at that very moment.
 The person who prepared something previously always focuses on the chances.

>>The person who\'s prepared often focuses on the chances. 
 Our life is at least 100 years, so we must do anything when we hope to do something, I think.

>>Our life lasts at least a hundred years, so I think we must do everything while we can.
 I will change the content of this composition.

>>I will change the content of the composition.
 To make some sentences, I must think about the theme and I try to make it to be reasonable.

>>To make some sentences, I must think about a topic and elaborate it.
 Most of them was about the weather.

>>Most of them were about the weather.
 Nowadays, the weather is my main concern. It\'s because I would like to see a real blue sky.

>>Nowadays, the weather is my main concern because I would want to see a blue sky.
 Every morning, the first thing that I do is to check the sky status whether it is dusty or not in.

>>Every morning, the first thing I do is check the sky\'s condition and whether it\'s dusty or not in.
 And I wrote down the environment theme many time secondly.

>>And I\'ve written down the environment\'s topic a bunch of times.
 Maybe it is also related with the weather.

>>Maybe it could also be related to the weather.
 Political issues or international issues are rare and the themes in the evaluation page may be vulgar.

>>Political issues or international issues are rarely going to be used because it may be a bit too vulgar on the evaluation page.