6-41th Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I\'m so sorry I wasn\'t able to speak with you earlier. But anyway thank you for sending me these. I completely agree with you these are well-thought statements.
I think I will take these tips into consideration when I\'d plan a trip for my family. Thank you!
What do you think importantly when you plan to take a trip with your family.
>>What do you think are the necessities when you plan a family trip?
First, we have to contemplate about the gourmet meal that everybody is favorite.
>>First, we have to contemplate on the food that everybody will be able to eat.
Second, the accommodation is also considered heavily, especially if you have children.
>>Second, the accommodation must be checked thoroughly especially if you have children.
Third, the sight thing is also an important when we take a trip.
>>Third, sight-seeing is also important when you take a trip.
And lastly, the schedule of the trip must be reasonable, too.
>>And lastly, the schedule of the trip must be right for everyone.
In my family\'s trip, I don\'t care about all things.
>>During my family\'s trips, I really don\'t mind everything.
Several years ago, I had planned it but it was very difficult.
>>Several years ago, I was the one who planned everything but it was very difficult.
That was terrible for our family.
>>That was a terrible trip for our family.
Since then, the trip\'s plan has been set up by my wife.
>>Since then, our family trips are planned by my wife.
Actually, my wife has enjoyed the trip and set up the schedule from a college student.
>>Actually, my wife has enjoyed a trip that was set up by a college student.
So, her\'s plan has been composited already well and our family always satisfy with her plan.
>>So she plans ahead of time and it\'s planned well. Our family\'s always satisfied with her plans.
During enjoying the trip, the thing that I never do is to say \'no\'.
>>When everyone is enjoying the trip, I never say \"no.\"
It\'s because it is not my plan.
>>It\'s because I didn\'t plan it.
If I am participated in the plan, I would like to say \'no\'.
>>If I am part of the plan, I would not want to say \"no\".
I think, Saying \'no\', which is not polite.
>>I think declining and saying no is impolite.
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