6-41th Homework

2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Asia

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What do you think importantly when you plan to take a trip with your family. First, we have to contemplate about the gourmet meal that everybody is favorite. Second, the accommodation is also considered heavily, especially if you have children. Third, the sight thing is also an important when we take a trip. And lastly, the schedule of the trip must be reasonable, too. In my family's trip, I don't care about all things. Several years ago, I had planned it but it was very difficult. That was terrible for our family. Since then, the trip's plan has been set up by my wife Actually, my wife has enjoyed the trip and set up the schedule from a college student. So, her's plan has been composited already well and our family always satisfy with her plan. During enjoying the trip, the thing that I never do is to say 'no'. It's because it is not my plan. If I am participated in the plan, I would like to say 'no'. I think, Saying 'no', which is not polite.

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Hi [이름]! I\'m so sorry I wasn\'t able to speak with you earlier. But anyway thank you for sending me these. I completely agree with you these are well-thought statements.
I think I will take these tips into consideration when I\'d plan a trip for my family. Thank you!

What do you think importantly when you plan to take a trip with your family.

>>What do you think are the necessities when you plan a family trip?
 First, we have to contemplate about the gourmet meal that everybody is favorite.

>>First, we have to contemplate on the food that everybody will be able to eat.
 Second, the accommodation is also considered heavily, especially if you have children.

>>Second, the accommodation must be checked thoroughly especially if you have children.
 Third, the sight thing is also an important when we take a trip.

>>Third, sight-seeing is also important when you take a trip.
 And lastly, the schedule of the trip must be reasonable, too.

>>And lastly, the schedule of the trip must be right for everyone.
 In my family\'s trip, I don\'t care about all things.

>>During my family\'s trips, I really don\'t mind everything.
 Several years ago, I had planned it but it was very difficult.

>>Several years ago, I was the one who planned everything but it was very difficult.
 That was terrible for our family.

>>That was a terrible trip for our family.
 Since then, the trip\'s plan has been set up by my wife.

>>Since then, our family trips are planned by my wife.
 Actually, my wife has enjoyed the trip and set up the schedule from a college student.

>>Actually, my wife has enjoyed a trip that was set up by a college student.
 So, her\'s plan has been composited already well and our family always satisfy with her plan.

>>So she plans ahead of time and it\'s planned well. Our family\'s always satisfied with her plans.
 During enjoying the trip, the thing that I never do is to say \'no\'.

>>When everyone is enjoying the trip, I never say \"no.\"
 It\'s because it is not my plan.

>>It\'s because I didn\'t plan it.
 If I am participated in the plan, I would like to say \'no\'.

>>If I am part of the plan, I would not want to say \"no\".
 I think, Saying \'no\', which is not polite.

>>I think declining and saying no is impolite.

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