6-4th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! :)
Thank you for writing this awesome for today.
I\'m glad to know that you are very much concerned about our environment.
I think people nowadays use plastic bags in excess.
There is a new policy in my city that plastic bags will be banned.
I sincerely hope this law will be very effective.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again next week.
Stay warm and safe. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
We put a lot of garbage into the trash bin everyday.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We throw a lot of trash into the trash bin everyday.
But we don\'t recognize how many it is and we also don\'t care about it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But we don\'t recognize how much we have put in and we also don\'t care about it.
I think we think about it as a garbage and so we don\'t want to see again.
>> I think we think about it as a garbage and so we don\'t want to see it again.
From about 20 years, we classify the garbage according to the material and then we put the classified garbage into the specific bin that is classified.
>> For about 20 years, we classify the garbage according to the material and then we put the classified garbage into the specific bin where it is classified.
Anyway, I don\'t want to use some plastic box buying the goods.
>> Anyway, I don\'t want to use some plastic boxes/bags when buying the goods.
But the plastic box is very common in Korea and every country.
>> But the plastic box/bag is very common in Korea and in every country.
Sometimes, I don\'t use it even if the clerk put the goods into the plastic box.
>> Sometimes, I don\'t use it even if the clerk puts the goods into the plastic box/bag.
In the shopping mall, there is a big market that we often go to.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There is a big market in the shopping mall that we often go to.
Many goods use the plastic box as a wrapping paper for protecting and advertising.
>> Many goods use the plastic box/bag as a wrapping paper for protection and advertisement.
I often feel that it is excessive.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I often feel that it is too much.
In the most outside, there is a wrapping paper and there is another wrapping paper if we open the most outside.
>> [Do you mean]: The item is repeatedly wrap in plastic bags.
The company that sells the goods say that it is to protect things inside.
>> The company that sells the goods says that it is done to protect the things inside.
I think it is not useless.
>> I think it is useless.
We have to reduce the use of the plastic box.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We need to reduce the use of the plastic box/bag.
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