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2018-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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Homework for the day: If you are to live abroad, what food would you miss most from home? I feel hungry unexpectedly when i got the homework:D I often think about similar things. As like \'What if i were to live abroad?\' \'Will i become lonely?\' \'What if the food doesn\'t agree with me? These questions make me interesting. To be honestly i don\'t worry part of food because i always feel hungry and want to food >< But I\'m going to miss my mother\'s food. The foods maded from my mami are very tasty and to be delicious! And the food give me not only taste but good memories when i was child ate food.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Lyn! We\'re the same, I\'m always hungry as well. Food is something I genuinely love, haha! Anyway, good job in doing your homework. I appreciate it! Keep them coming! ~Teacher Elisha

Homework for the day: If you are to live abroad, what food would you miss most from home?
=>I feel hungry unexpectedly when i got the homework:D

>> I unexpectedly felt hungry when I got the homework.
 I often think about similar things.

>> I often think about things that are similar to this question.

 As like \'What if i were to live abroad?\' \'Will i become lonely?\' \'What if the food doesn\'t agree with me?

>> Questions like,  \'What if I were to live abroad?\', \'Will I become lonely?\', \'What if the food doesn\'t agree with me?\'

These questions make me interesting.

>> These questions are interesting to me.
 To be honestly i don\'t worry part of food because i always feel hungry and want to food ><

>> To be honest, I don\'t worry about food because I always feel hungry and I always want to eat food.
 But I\'m going to miss my mother\'s food.

>> But, I\'m going to miss the food that my mother makes.
 The foods maded from my mami are very tasty and to be delicious!

>> The foods my mom makes are very tasty and delicious!

And the food give me not only taste but good memories when i was child ate food.

>> The food does not only taste good but it also brings back good memories of me eating food as a child.

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