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I do love my mom's foods which are made my mom. When I was young, I can't forget my mom's foods. She can cook a lot of Korean foods like Kimchi, Bulgogi and many things. I wanted to learn her foods because when I was young, I wanted to play with friends. After I get married, I miss my mom's foods and want to learn her foods but I can't it because she went to heaven. If my mom would live with me, I ask her to teach me her foods. I really miss her. These days when I cook for my family, I have to do a search on the Internet. I don't cook very well so I am sorry about that to my family. I will learn how to cook.

A very impressive essay [이름]! ^^ I appreciate how much effort you put in your essays and you are improving. We just need to work on the articulateness and precision of your sentences. Also, be careful when capitalizing words. Only capitalize proper nouns, not common nouns.   See you in class. ^^   ==Teacher Bella==     I do love my mom\'s foods which are made my mom. >> I love my mother\'s cooking. When I was young, I can\'t forget my mom\'s foods. >>I couldn\'t forget my mom\'s cooking when I was younger.She can cook a lot of Korean foods like Kimchi, Bulgogi and many things. >> She can cook a variety of Korean food like kimchi, bulgogi and many others. I wanted to learn her foods because when I was young, I wanted to play with friends. >> I wanted to learn how she cooked but since I was young, I just wanted to play with my friends. After I get married, I miss my mom\'s foods and want to learn her foods but I can\'t it because she went to heaven. >> After I got married, I missed and wanted to learn how she cooked but I can\'t because she has gone to heaven. If my mom would live with me, I ask her to teach me her foods. >> If my mom were still alive, I would ask her to teach me how to cook. I really miss her. >> CORRECT These days when I cook for my family, I have to do a search on the Internet. >> Nowadays, when I cook for my family, I still have to look it up on the internet. I don\'t cook very well so I am sorry about that to my family.I will learn how to cook. >> I feel sorry towards my family since I can\'t coook very well but I will learn.