6-5th Homework

Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay. 

I think in this day and age, we should care more for our eyes because most of our electronic devices emit radiation. 

I think radiation destroys the eyes faster. 

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great. 

See you in class on Thursday. 

Take care always. 

~Teacher C[이름] :)   

Are there many people who wear the classes?

>> Are there many people who wear glasses?
In Korea, there are many people wearing the classes.

>> In Korea, there are many people wearing glasses.
I have worn the classed from the elementary school.

>> I have worn glasses since I was in elementary school.
In my case, wearing the classes is not related with a TV or a book.

>> In my case, wearing glasses is not related with watching TV or reading a book.
When I went to the elementary school, classmates who wore the classes was not many in the class room.

>> When I went to the elementary school, students who wore glasses were not that many in the class room.
Nowadays, in the class room students who wear the classes are over the half.

>> Nowadays, in the class room, students who wear glasses are over half of their population.
Maybe, it is related with a mobile device, for example, a smart phone or a game player.

>> Maybe, it is related with gadgets, for example, a smart phone or a game player.
The eyes which always see far away are healthy.\\

>> [Do you mean]: The eyes which are not exposed to these gadgets all the time are healthier.

In the complex modern society, we can use several devices to get the information and to take an advantage.

>> In the complex modern society, we can use several devices to get the information and to take advantage of it.
Everyday we use it, everyday we have to see it in a short distance.

>> Everyday we have to use them. Everyday we have to see them in looking at things in a short distance.
If you want to see something in a long distance, but the eyes could not see it because it is not familiar with.

>> [Do you mean]: If you want to see something in a long distance, the eyes could not see it because it is worn out.

So, we have to wear the classes to see something in a long distance.

>> So, we have to wear glasses to see something in a long distance.
Sometimes, I imagine the life which I live a plain in Mongolia without any electric devices.

>> Sometimes, I imagine a life in Mongolia where there are no electric devices.