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2015-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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My favorite restaurant is Ashley's. It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea. They serve a variety of food like sushi, vegetable dishes and more. My children and I like sushi which is very delicious. I like white meat which is found in fish and I also like fruits. I can't cook sushi at home because tuna is very expensive. That is why I go to the family restaurant in order to have it. I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there. So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! You really prepare well about our topic. Just double check your spelling. Teacher Venus^^   My favorite restaurant is Ashley\'s. >>>CORRECT It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea. >>>It is a family restaurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea. They serve a variety of food like sushi, vegetable dishes and more.>>>CORRECT   My children and I like sushi which is very delicious.>>>CORRECT   I like white meat which is found in fish and I also like fruits.>>>CORRECT   I can\'t cook sushi at home because tuna is very expensive. >>>CORRECT   That is why I go to the family restaurant in order to have it.>>>CORRECT   I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there. >>>CORRECT   So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price. >>>better: So I think that the food there is great and the price is also reasonable.

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