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My favorite restaurant is Ashley's.
It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea.
They serve a variety of food like sushi, vegetable dishes and more.
My children and I like sushi which is very delicious.
I like white meat which is found in fish and I also like fruits.
I can't cook sushi at home because tuna is very expensive. That is why I go to the family restaurant in order to have it.
I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there. So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price.
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My favorite restaurant is Ashley\'s.
>>>CORRECT
It is a family restanurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea.
>>>It is a family restaurant which is a popular restaurant in Korea.
They serve a variety of food like sushi, vegetable dishes and more.>>>CORRECT
My children and I like sushi which is very delicious.>>>CORRECT
I like white meat which is found in fish and I also like fruits.>>>CORRECT
I can\'t cook sushi at home because tuna is very expensive.
>>>CORRECT
That is why I go to the family restaurant in order to have it.>>>CORRECT
I can eat not only sushi but also many foods there.
>>>CORRECT
So I think that the food is great and is reasonable in price.
>>>better: So I think that the food there is great and the price is also reasonable.
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