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2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you. I will read some aesop fables books that you recommend. Doing a job is very important in our life because after we work, we can get money. When I was a student, I learned and I thought that doing a job that I like is more important than to earn more money. But nowadays it is not easy to get a job. In my country, many people can't have their jobs. So nowadays it is important to earn money and having job.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름],

I guess it\'s true in every country. It\'s getting harder and harder to find a job. So instead of looking for a job that you really like, you just settle for any job that you can earn money. That\'s the reality! Have a great day, Ms. [이름]! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Thank you.

>> correct!
I will read some aesop fables books that you recommend.
>> I will read some of the Aesop fables that you recommended.
Doing a job is very important in our life because after we work, we can get money.

>> correct!
When I was a student, I learned and I thought that doing a job that I like is more important than to earn more money.

>> correct!
But nowadays it is not easy to get a job.

>> correct!
In my country, many people can\'t have their jobs.

>> In my country, many people can\'t find a job.
So nowadays it is important to earn money and having job.

>> So nowadays it is important to earn money than having a job that we love.

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