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학생이 쓴 원문
Do you like chocolate?
>>> Yes, I like chocolate!
Which country do you think makes the most delicious chocolate?
>>> Hmm... I think makes the most delicious chocolate is Korea..^^
Do you think chocolate is healthy?
>>> No, I think chocolate is not healthy.
강사 첨삭
[이름]! We both like chocolates.. Hmmm.. There are some health benefits of chocolates.. It actually relieves stress and it will make you feel happy... But it will make you fat... Kikiki ^^
Do you like chocolate? >>> Yes, I like chocolate!>>> Correct!
Which country do you think makes the most delicious chocolate?>>> Hmm... I think makes the most delicious chocolate is Korea..^^>>> I think, Korea has the most delicious chocolates.
Do you think chocolate is healthy?>>> No, I think chocolate is not healthy.
>>> Correct!
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