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2016-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I am in charge of the export. Also I deal with collecting data and writing reports for my team. Sometimes, my team leader want to know about another countries laws. I don't know the way to find and I can't ask someone. Because another countries's laws are very difficult also I don't know my country's law. I am very angry and I feel annoy when he wants it. However I have to do very hard to find. So I search on the internet and ask someone. But I can't find it still. And then I tell him I tried to fine your question but I can't find it. But it is my best. Can you understand me?

강사 첨삭


Hello, Ms. [이름]!

Nowadays, we could find almost everything on the internet. Each country has a government website you could check pertaining to anything about that country. For example laws or policies, tourist spots and others. Most also have an English version on their website. What country had you been looking for that you can\'t find? Maybe, they are the few who didn\'t set-up their own website yet. Thank you for sending your composition. Good job! See you later.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I am in charge of the export.

>> I am in charge of the export department.
Also I deal with collecting data and writing reports for my team.

>> correct!
Sometimes, my team leader want to know about another countries laws.

>> Sometimes, my team leader wants to know about other country\'s laws.
I don\'t know the way to find and I can\'t ask someone.

>> I don\'t know the way to find out and I can\'t ask someone.
Because another countries\'s laws are very difficult also I don\'t know my country\'s law.
>> Because other country\'s laws are very difficult and also I don\'t know my country\'s laws.

I am very angry and I feel annoy when he wants it.

>> I am very angry and I feel annoyed when he asks me that.
However I have to do very hard to find.

>> However, I have to try my best to find out the answer.
So I search on the internet and ask someone.

>> correct!
But I can\'t find it still.

>> correct!
And then I tell him I tried to fine your question but I can\'t find it.

>> And then I tell him I tried to find an answer to your question but I can\'t find it.
But it is my best. Can you understand me?

>> correct!

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