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2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

In drama, many women are very smart and they seems the confidence. When I was young, I really envy them. If I still am young, maybe I want to be like them but I don't want anymore. I don't a smart woman but I like my life and I want my children to be smart women and love themself.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

You are a very sweet and loving mom! See you on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

In drama, many women are very smart and they seems the confidence.

>> In dramas, many women are very smart and they seem very confident.
When I was young, I really envy them.

>> correct!
If I still am young, maybe I want to be like them but I don\'t want anymore.

>> If I am still young, maybe I want to be like them but I don\'t want that anymore.
I don\'t a smart woman but I like my life and I want my children to be smart women and love themselves.

>> I\'m not a smart woman but I like my life and I want my children to be smart women and love themselves.

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