6-6th Homework

Hello, [이름]! :)   

Finally, it\'s Friday! ^_^

Thank you for writing an essay.
It\'s true that each of us has different characteristics.

When we are working as a team, we need to learn how to get along well with each other.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Tuesday.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

The number of team members is 21 persons.

>> The number of team members is 21.

OR >> There are 21 persons/members in our team.
There are so many people who have a different characteristics respectively.

>> There are so many people who have different respective characteristics.
In the working place, they discover their traits sometimes.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> They sometimes discover their traits in the workplace.
in my case, when I face at a trouble in the meeting and I must refute it, but I could not refute it.

>> In my case, when I face a trouble in a meeting and I must refute it, I fail to do it.
After passing it away, I begin to refute it but it is too late.

>> [Do you mean]: After the opportunity has passed away, my opportunity to refute is also lost.

Since my team is a big organization, I could not like all members.

>> Since my team is a big organization, it is natural for me not to like all members.
Sometimes, I hate a members who doesn\'t work together.

>> Sometimes, I hate members who don\'t work together.
Sometimes, I like a members even if one doesn\'t work together.

>> Sometimes, I like some members even if they don\'t work together.
Although the woman engineer in electrical field is very rare, there is one person in my team.

>> Having a female electrical engineer in the field is very rare but we have one in my team.

No woman is in the hardware field.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There\'s no woman assigned in the hardware field.
I don\'t know why women dislike to manage the hardware.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I don\'t know why women don\'t like to manage the hardware.
In my house, if something was broken down, my wife would not touch it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If something was broken in my house, my wife would not touch it.
To get along well with team members, the first thing that you have to think about is. It is not to have too much the expectation of members.

>> To get along well with the team members, the first thing that you have to think about is, not to have too much expectations from the them.
Sometimes, we could conflict with a trivial thing because of the difference.

>> Sometimes, we could have a conflict with a trivial thing because of the/our difference.