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I think gender is difference between woman and man.
Most women are soft and delicate but most men are not.
And most women are mentally stronger better than most men but most men are not stronger better than women.
Anyway I think most women are better than most men in many ways.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Go, go, go, women power!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think gender is difference between woman and man.
>> I think gender roles are different between a woman and a man.Most women are soft and delicate but most men are not.
>> correct!And most women are mentally stronger better than most men but most men are not stronger better than women.
>> Most women are mentally stronger than most men.Anyway, I think most women are better than most men in many ways.
>> Anyway, I think that most women are better than most men in many ways.
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