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학생이 쓴 원문
My office has many factories in China, Russia, Slovakia and many countries.
I want to work in China because it is near my country.
When I miss my family, I can go home eveytime.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
But then you told me you are having a problem with your China factory, right? Based on my experience, working in your own country is still better than working in another country.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My office has many factories in China, Russia, Slovakia and many countries.
>> correct!
I want to work in China because it is near my country.
>> correct!
When I miss my family, I can go home eveytime.
>> When I miss my family, I can go home anytime.
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