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2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

"Practice makes perfect" I really like this sentence. I have to practice everythings in my life. However we can not practice our life again. So we have to try and try for perfect.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

Another saying is \'nobody\'s perfect\'. Everybody commits mistakes. Everyone has flaws. I guess we just need to strive to be the best we can be. Do you agree?

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

\"Practice makes perfect\"

>> correct!
 I really like this sentence.

>> correct!
 I have to practice everything in my life.

>> correct!
 However we cannot practice our life again.

>> However we only have one life.
 So we have to try and try for perfect.

>> So we should try and try for perfection.

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