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Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this thought! ^^ They always say that we need to spend our life to the fullest, we need to show our love to all the people who are important to us, so that when the time comes, you won\'t regret anything. I believe this Ms. [이름], so I always say \"I LOVE YOU\" to my son and husband. I hope you are doing the same and one more thing always SMILE. :)
Ms. [이름] make the best out of it all okay? ^^
Call you then tomorrow! ^^
~Teacher Rain~
If I can get the chance to go back to a time in the past, I want to go when I am a child.
>> If I can get the chance to go back to a time in the past, I want to go back when I was still a child.
Because I can meet my parent and I would try to be happy with them.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Because I can meet my parents again and I would try to be happy with them.
And I don\'t want to regret like now.
>> And I don\'t want to regret it again.
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