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강사 첨삭
I don\'t have many friends but I have a best friend.
>> Correct
I met her when I was a middle school student.
>>Correct
or
>> We met when we were middle school students
She was very cute and very short and I was very tall and fat.
>> Correct
But we became close very fast.
>> Correct
or
>>> But we quickly became very close.
We went to school and hung out every day.
>> Correct
We didn\'t have secret together.
>> We didn\'t keep secret from each other.
We grew up and got married.
>> Correct
She has a son and I have two daughters.
>> Correct
We can\'t meet often because she lives far from my place.
>> Correct
However we can talk every day on the internet with Social Network Service.
>> Correct
or
>> However, we talk on the internet or SNS everyday.
We usually talk about our children and husband that is just gossip.
>> We usually talk about our children and husband which is almost gossip.
I miss her.
>> Correct
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