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2018-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't have many friends but I have a best friend. I met her when I was a middle school student. She was very cute and very short and I was very tall and fat. But we became close very fast. We went to school and hung out every day. We didn't have secret together. We grew up and got married. She has a son and I have two daughters. We can't meet often because she lives far from my place. However we can talk every day on the internet with Social Network Service. We usually talk about our children and husband that is just gossip. I miss her.

강사 첨삭

I don\'t have many friends but I have a best friend.

>> Correct
 I met her when I was a middle school student.

>>Correct

or

>> We met when we were middle school students
 She was very cute and very short and I was very tall and fat.

>> Correct
 But we became close very fast.

>> Correct

or

>>> But we quickly became very close.
 We went to school and hung out every day.

>> Correct
 We didn\'t have secret together.

>> We didn\'t keep secret from each other.
 We grew up and got married. 

>> Correct
 She has a son and I have two daughters.

>> Correct
 We can\'t meet often because she lives far from my place.

>> Correct

However we can talk every day on the internet with Social Network Service.

>> Correct

or

>> However, we talk on the internet or SNS everyday.
 We usually talk about our children and husband that is just gossip.

>> We usually talk about our children and husband which is almost gossip.
 I miss her.

>> Correct

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