6-8th Homework

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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What do you think about an impromptu trip after watch a TV show? I have a favorite show watching it every weekends. Last weekends, I also watched the TV show in the evening. It was absolutely fun. In the show, there were 6 members to execute a specific mission and they were divided into two groups, one was to stay in a house and another group went out even it was very cold. The members in the outside house had a show to seem not to be cold. Finally, after their missions were done, they went to a hot spring somewhere. Actually, I like the hot spring and I like more if it is outside even. After watching the TV show, I decided to go the hot spring that is outside. It was 8:30 PM. The hot spring is located far away, so it took 3 hours to get there. The arriving time was 11:50 PM. In the next morning, we went to the hot spring as fast as possible since it is very popular. If we arrived at late, we would wait for 1 hour, fortunately we didn't wait. The hot spring was very fantastic.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! :)   

What a great way to spend your weekend.

I\'m happy to know that you enjoyed staying at the hot spring with your family.

I love going there too.

Hot spring help in relaxing the body and relieving it from body aches.

My dad and my boyfriend are both particularly fond of the hot springs.

I suddenly want to go there today because of our cold weather. kkk.

Anyway, I hope you have a great day today.

See you on Thursday. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

What do you think about an impromptu trip after watch a TV show?

>> What do you think about an impromptu trip after watching a TV show?
I have a favorite show watching it every weekends.

>> I have a favorite show and watch it every weekends.
Last weekends, I also watched the TV show in the evening.

>> Last weekend, I also watched the TV show in the evening.
It was absolutely fun.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I really enjoyed watching it.
In the show, there were 6 members to execute a specific mission and they were divided into two groups, one was to stay in a house and another
group went out even it was very cold.

>> In the show, there were 6 members to execute a specific mission and they were divided into two groups. One was to stay in a house and another group went out even if it was very cold.
The members in the outside house had a show to seem not to be cold.

>> [Do you mean]: The people outside the house didn\'t seem to feel so cold.
Finally, after their missions were done, they went to a hot spring somewhere.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> After their missions were finally done, they went to a hot spring somewhere.
Actually, I like the hot spring and I like more if it is outside even.

>> Actually, I like the hot spring and I like it more when it\'s outside.
After watching the TV show, I decided to go the hot spring that is outside.

>> After watching the TV show, I decided to go to the hot spring that is outside.
It was 8:30 PM.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The time was (at) 8:30 PM.
The hot spring is located far away, so it took 3 hours to get there.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The hot spring is far from my house, so it took three hours to get there.
The arriving time was 11:50 PM.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We arrived at 11:50 PM.
In the next morning, we went to the hot spring as fast as possible since it is very popular.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The next morning, we immediately went to the hot spring because it is a well-known place.
If we arrived at late, we would wait for 1 hour, fortunately we didn\'t wait.

>> If we arrive late, we would wait for 1/one hour.  Fortunately we didn\'t wait.
The hot spring was very fantastic.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The hot spring was awesome

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