6.9
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question:
Do you love reading books? Why do you think some people don\'t like reading?
Answer: Yes, I love reading books. I feel sad. Because they don’t now many fun stories.
강사 첨삭
~ Writing Task:
In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question:
Do you love reading books? Why do you think some people don\'t like reading?
Answer:
In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question:
Do you love reading books? Why do you think some people don\'t like reading?
Answer:
Yes, I love reading books.
>> CORRECT!
I feel sad.
>> CORRECT!
Because they don’t now many fun stories.
>> I feel sad, they don’t now many fun stories.
OR >> I feel sad, they don’t now many interesting stories.
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