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2018-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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Homework for the day: Which countries would you like to visit and why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences. There are many countries where i want to trip because always i got a plan but i don\'t have been still go to abroad. So, it\'s hard, If i choose one of them, i\'ll choose one of the European countries, France. Since i was young, i have studied art and graduated from art. So to me, France is a very interesting and visited country with a vivid history of art. Not only for that reason, i want to visit the beauty of the historic site and i want to taste French food.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Lyn! France is a very magical country, isn\'t it? I  would also love to visit France one day. Anyway, you did great in writing your homework! I know that with more practice, you\'ll be able to master grammar in no time. Don\'t give up! See you! ~

~Teacher Elisha ^^

Homework for the day: Which countries would you like to visit and why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
=>There are many countries where i want to trip because always i got a plan but i don\'t have been still go to abroad.

>> There are many countries I want to travel to. I always plan to travel but I have never been abroad.
 So, it\'s hard, If i choose one of them, i\'ll choose one of the European countries, France.

>> It\'s hard to choose one but if I have to, I will choose France which is one of the European countries.
 Since i was young, i have studied art and graduated from art.

>> Since I was young, I have been studying art. I also graduated majoring in Art.

So to me, France is a very interesting and visited country with a vivid history of art.

>> For me, France is a very interesting country to visit because it has a vivid history when it comes to art.
 Not only for that reason, i want to visit the beauty of the historic site and i want to taste French food.

>> Aside from that reason, I also want to visit beautiful historical sites and to taste French food.

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