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2017-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Mount Everest is the highest mountain in the world (My answer) the most high mountain in the world / the highest mountain in the world 2) Yesterday evening I saw a very good film (My answer) I saw a very good film / I have seen a very good film 3) At the moment I don't study very hard (My answer) I don't study very much / I'm not studying very much 4) We enjoyned our holyday in Spain despite the weather was terrible (My answer) despite the weather was terrible / although the weather was terrible 5) We were really hungry so we went to a restaurant (My answer) so we went to a restaurant / then we go to a restaurant

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! ^^


Thank you for answering this composition.

This shows how important it is to use appropriate words to

complete our sentences. :)

Please review on the corrected ones.

See you dear :)


Teacher Glenda



1) Mount Everest is the highest mountain in the world (My answer)
the most high mountain in the world / the highest mountain in the world 

>> Correct
2) Yesterday evening I saw a very good film (My answer)
I saw a very good film / I have seen a very good film
>> Correct
3) At the moment I don\'t study very hard (My answer)
I don\'t study very much / I\'m not studying very much
>>I\'m not studying very much
4) We enjoyned our holyday in Spain despite the weather was terrible (My answer)
despite the weather was terrible / although the weather was terrible
>> although the weather was terrible
5) We were really hungry so we went to a restaurant (My answer)
so we went to a restaurant / then we go to a restaurant

>> Correct

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