6.9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! I hand in my homework so late today.
I sometimes enjoy cooking at home. I am interested in various tastes of food and I love to eat beautiful and delicious food. I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eating food that I made. They also love to eat my food.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning MR. [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. I\'m glad that you enjoy cooking for your children. Anyway, please go over my corrections. Have a good day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! I hand in my homework so late today.>> Correct.I sometimes enjoy cooking at home.
>> Correct.
I am interested in various tastes of food and I love to eat beautiful and delicious food.
>> Correct.
I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eating food that I made.
>> I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eat food that I made.
They also love to eat my food.>> They also love to eat the food that I prepare.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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