6.9 Homework

2015-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! I hand in my homework so late today. I sometimes enjoy cooking at home. I am interested in various tastes of food and I love to eat beautiful and delicious food. I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eating food that I made. They also love to eat my food. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning MR. [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. I\'m glad that you enjoy cooking for your children. Anyway, please go over my corrections. Have a good day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! I hand in my homework so late today.>> Correct.I sometimes enjoy cooking at home. >> Correct. I am interested in various tastes of food and I love to eat beautiful and delicious food. >> Correct. I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eating food that I made. >> I feel so happy that I can watch my kids eat food that I made. They also love to eat my food.>> They also love to eat the food that I prepare.Thank you! >> Correct.

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