6 DAY HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your ideal date experience?
My ideal date is to visit my boyfriend high school.
Because I can experience my boyfriend school days. So we can share our childhood memories together.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I find it adorable, Sophie! I hope your boyfriend can take you there.-Faith-
What is your ideal date experience?>> CORRECT
My ideal date is to visit my boyfriend high school. Because I can experience my boyfriend school days.
>> My ideal date is to visit my boyfriend\'s high school so that it would feel like experiencing my boyfriend\'s school days, too.
My ideal date is to visit my boyfriend high school. Because I can experience my boyfriend school days.
>> My ideal date is to visit my boyfriend\'s high school so that it would feel like experiencing my boyfriend\'s school days, too.
So we can share our childhood memories together.
>> Therefore, we can share our childhood memories together.
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