6. homework
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Topic: Office Policy
Question: What was your job before you became a Barista?
I worked at tour agency, because my major is international tourism.
After graduation, I joined the tour company as an intern
Tour agency office polices are we do kindly talk to customer and we have to take a phone ring before three bell.
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I worked at tour agency, because my major is international tourism.
>> I worked at a tour agency because my major is international tourism.
>> I worked at a tour agency because my major is international tourism.
After graduation, I joined the tour company as an intern
>> After graduation, I joined the tour company as an intern.
Tour agency office polices are we do kindly talk to customer and we have to take a phone ring before three bell.
>> After graduation, I joined the tour company as an intern.
Tour agency office polices are we do kindly talk to customer and we have to take a phone ring before three bell.
>> One of the tour agency office policies is to be kind when talking to our
customers. We also have to answer the call after three phone rings.
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