60. Homework
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Q. What trend in clothing do you particularly like or dislike?
I like to see a person who is wearing suit like a business man.
That’s because it looks neat, dandy and supper hot.
And the clothes make them looks smart.
But I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes such as jean pants, hood t-shorts, and man to man t-shorts.
If I were tall with long legs, I would wear a suit with putting on rubber shoes every day although it is uncomfortable to wear since it gives buff about appearance.
But, unfortunately, I am not.
That’s why I prefer wearing comfortable clothes only.
I like to see a person who is wearing sexy clothes because they looks so hot.
However, I don’t like to see a person who is wearing clothes that I mentioned in public places.
I don’t know where I must put my eyes since they make my sight blind.
Furthermore, I don’t like to go to police office owing to the reason that I see them even it is only by an accident.
Therefore, I just want people have basic manner about wearing clothes in public places if they go out from their home.
강사 첨삭
Whew! In my case, I actually like the trend during the winter and summer^^
>>CORRECT!
I like to see a person who is wearing suit like a business man.
>>I like to see a person who is wearing a suit like a businessman.
That’s because it looks neat, dandy and supper hot.
>>CORRECT!
And the clothes make them looks smart.
>>And the clothes make them look smart.
But I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes such as jean pants, hood t-shorts, and man to man t-shorts.
>>But I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes such as jeans, hooded shirt, and man to man t-shorts.
If I were tall with long legs, I would wear a suit with putting on rubber shoes every day although it is uncomfortable to wear since it gives buff about appearance.
>>If I were tall with long legs, I would wear a suit with rubber shoes every day although it is uncomfortable to wear since it gives buff about appearance.
But, unfortunately, I am not.
>>CORRECT!
That’s why I prefer wearing comfortable clothes only.
>>CORRECT!
I like to see a person who is wearing sexy clothes because they looks so hot.
>>I like to see a person who is wearing sexy clothes because they look so hot.
However, I don’t like to see a person who is wearing clothes that I mentioned in public places.
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know where I must put my eyes since they make my sight blind.
>>CORRECT!
Furthermore, I don’t like to go to police office owing to the reason that I see them even it is only by an accident.
>>Furthermore, I don’t like to go to the police office owing to the reason that I accidentally looked at them.
Therefore, I just want people have basic manner about wearing clothes in public places if they go out from their home.
>>Therefore, I just want people have basic manners about wearing clothes in public places if they go out of their home.
It shows some sort of elegance, but thinking about the subzero temperature also makes me think twice^^
Moreover, seeing a person wearing an elegant suit looks smart (like an instant overhaul)
Have a great day, Jason^^
See you!
Q. What trend in clothing do you particularly like or dislike?>>CORRECT!
I like to see a person who is wearing suit like a business man.
>>I like to see a person who is wearing a suit like a businessman.
That’s because it looks neat, dandy and supper hot.
>>CORRECT!
And the clothes make them looks smart.
>>And the clothes make them look smart.
But I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes such as jean pants, hood t-shorts, and man to man t-shorts.
>>But I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes such as jeans, hooded shirt, and man to man t-shorts.
If I were tall with long legs, I would wear a suit with putting on rubber shoes every day although it is uncomfortable to wear since it gives buff about appearance.
>>If I were tall with long legs, I would wear a suit with rubber shoes every day although it is uncomfortable to wear since it gives buff about appearance.
But, unfortunately, I am not.
>>CORRECT!
That’s why I prefer wearing comfortable clothes only.
>>CORRECT!
I like to see a person who is wearing sexy clothes because they looks so hot.
>>I like to see a person who is wearing sexy clothes because they look so hot.
However, I don’t like to see a person who is wearing clothes that I mentioned in public places.
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know where I must put my eyes since they make my sight blind.
>>CORRECT!
Furthermore, I don’t like to go to police office owing to the reason that I see them even it is only by an accident.
>>Furthermore, I don’t like to go to the police office owing to the reason that I accidentally looked at them.
Therefore, I just want people have basic manner about wearing clothes in public places if they go out from their home.
>>Therefore, I just want people have basic manners about wearing clothes in public places if they go out of their home.
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