61. Homework [Re]

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Take care and don\'t drink too much, Jason~

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Q. In your point of view, when should a child start getting pocket money from his or her parents? Why?
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I think parents would start giving pocket money their children when children would be able to know about value of money.

>>I think parents could start giving pocket money to their children when they are able to know about the value of money.

It should be a time after they enrolled elementary school, however someone would begin faster than I thought, but I am telling about the ordinary people.
>>It should be a time after they enrolled  in elementary school; however, someone would begin faster than I thought, but I am telling about the ordinary people.
That’s because teachers and parents teach their children regarding the value of the money when children would be studying about math.

>>That’s because teachers and parents teach their children regarding the value of money when children would be studying about math.

And they realized if they don’t have enough money to buy something what they want to have, then they will not get it.
>>And if they realized if they don’t have enough money to buy something that they want to have, then they will not get it.
Furthermore, I had an experience related with this situation with my nephew.

>>Furthermore, I had an experience related with this situation with my niece.

When she was 7 years old and didn’t know about money, I have given money about 10,000 won to her buying snacks that she wanted to eat.

>>When she was 7 years old and didn’t know about money, I have given her money which was about 10,000 won for her to buy snacks that she wanted to eat.

 However, she just wanted to get chocolate and stack candy instead of getting money.

>> However, she just wanted to get chocolates and snacks instead of getting money.

If she received 10,000 won from me, she could get more than 5 different types of snack, but she didn’t.

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She just chosen one chocolate and one stick candy since she didn’t know which one was more expensive.
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Thus, when children know worth about money, parents give only just enough or a few amounts money their children.

>>Thus, when children know the worth of money, parents give only just enough or a little amount of money to their children.

At the same time, they must teach them how to spend a few amounts of money efficiently or what is important to save money also.
>>At the same time, they must teach them how to spend a little amount of money efficiently or what is important to save money also.
In my opinion, just giving money makes their children’s life ruined.

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That\'s because they might be made bad habit like spending money without difficulty since children think money could get easily from their parents without any effort.
>>That\'s because they might have bad habits like spending money without difficulty since children think money could be earned easily from their parents without any effort.
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Q. In what way is your family important to you?
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When I feel depressed, they give cheer me up.
>>When I feel depressed, they cheer me up.
When I feel deep in the sadness, they teach to me the way how to overcome it.
>>When I feel deep sadness, they teach me ways how to overcome it.
When I feel happy, they make my happy feeling double.
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When I can’t find a way to solve a problem, they suggest me some directions based on their know how regarding a life.
>>When I can’t find a way to solve a problem, they suggest me some directions based on their knowledge regarding life.
When I was having an adolescence time during middle school, they endured annoyance that I made and thought me to find right way.
>>During my adolescence time in middle school, they endured the annoyance that I made and taught me to find the right way.
They have raised me to live an independently in society.
>>They have raised me to live independently in society.
That are the reasons why they are important to me.
>>Those are the reasons why they are important to me.
Hence, I want to give back to them a lot of things as much as their sacrifices owing to me and my younger brother since they had given lot of things up for us.
>>Hence, I want to give back to them a lot of things as much as their sacrifices for me and my younger brother since they had given lot of things up for us.
Therefore, I give them kind of pocket money every month when I get a salary from a company that I work.

>>Therefore, I give them pocket money every month when I get the salary from the company that I work for.

 And I ask them to go out for having special dinner together at least once a month.
>> And I ask them to go out for special dinner together at least once a month.
Sorry for the absent today’s class.

>>Sorry for being absent in today’s class.
 I am going to have party with companions tonight, I might have drink a lot, so I didn’t bring a car.

>> I am going to have a party with my companions tonight, I might drink a lot, so I didn’t bring a car.

Hence, I took a subway and bus.

>>Hence, I took a subway and a bus.
 That’s why I couldn’t have a class today.

>>CORRECT!
 Anyways, see you tomorrow

>> Anyways, see you tomorrow!