64. Homework
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Whew you made me hungry, Jason^^
I think your friend\'s idea is good, since it allows the meat\'s flavor to penetrate the soup :)
Wow~ I am starving, see you!
Q. What custom from your home country are you most fond of? Describe the custom and explain why you are fond of it.
>>CORRECT!
I can’t think about the fondest of custom in Korea. So I am going to writing about a special day.
>>I can’t think about the fondest custom in Korea, so I am going to writing about a special day.
I like the pork belly day called Sam-Guyp-Sal day in Korea.
>>I like the Pork Belly Day called Sam-Guyp-Sal day in Korea.
It is going to be held every march 3th.
>>It is held every March 3th.
That’s because pronunciation of 3 is the same as ‘Sam’ in Korea.
>>That’s because the pronunciation of 3 is the same as ‘Sam’ in Korea.
I guess the day was made by a person who worked for selling meat in butcher’s shop.
>>I guess the day was made by a person who sold meat in a butcher’s shop.
And it has been spread by others because most of Korean likes to eat pork belly.
>>And it has been spread by others because most of Korean people like to eat pork belly.
Furthermore, Korean enjoys drinking alcohol especially So-Ju and many people think pork belly is the best partner with alcohol.
>> Furthermore, Koreans enjoy drinking alcohol especially soju, and many people think pork belly is best partnered with alcohol.
Actually, I don’t like to drink alcohol so I don’t agree with them since I prefer to drink coke with it.
>>Actually, I don’t like to drink alcohol so I don’t agree with them since I prefer to drink Coke with it.
Anyways, during that day, most of the big markets and butcher’s shop is going to be selling it with a discounted price at least 20 % up to maximum 50 %.
>>Anyways, during that day, most of the big markets and butcher’s shops sell it at a discounted price at least 20 % up to maximum 50 %.
Hence, I will buy it a lot on special event and save it in refrigerator.
>>Hence, I will buy a lot of it on a special event and save it in a refrigerator.
My high school friend who has meat shop told me if I put pork belly into noodles while I am boiling it, the taste would be better.
>>My high school friend who has a meat shop told me if I put pork belly into noodles while I am boiling it, the taste would be better.
Thus, I will try cooking as an experiment.
>>Thus, I will try cooking this as an experiment.
I hope my friend gave me an good advice without fake.
>>I hope my friend gave me an good advice without faking it.
That\'s because, even if I buy meats with discount, it is expensive.
>>That\'s because, even if I buy meat with a discount, it is expensive.
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