64. Homework

2018-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Q. What custom from your home country are you most fond of? Describe the custom and explain why you are fond of it. I can’t think about the fondest of custom in Korea. So I am going to writing about a special day. I like the pork belly day called Sam-Guyp-Sal day in Korea. It is going to be held every march 3th. That’s because pronunciation of 3 is the same as ‘Sam’ in Korea. I guess the day was made by a person who worked for selling meat in butcher’s shop. And it has been spread by others because most of Korean likes to eat pork belly. Furthermore, Korean enjoys drinking alcohol especially So-Ju and many people think pork belly is the best partner with alcohol. Actually, I don’t like to drink alcohol so I don’t agree with them since I prefer to drink coke with it. Anyways, during that day, most of the big markets and butcher’s shop is going to be selling it with a discounted price at least 20 % up to maximum 50 %. Hence, I will buy it a lot on special event and save it in refrigerator. My high school friend who has meat shop told me if I put pork belly into noodles while I am boiling it, the taste would be better. Thus, I will try cooking as an experiment. I hope my friend gave me an good advice without fake. That's because, even if I buy meats with discount, it is expensive.

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Whew you made me hungry, Jason^^

I think your friend\'s idea is good, since it allows the meat\'s flavor to penetrate the soup :)

Wow~ I am starving, see you!

Q. What custom from your home country are you most fond of? Describe the custom and explain why you are fond of it.
>>CORRECT!
I can’t think about the fondest of custom in Korea. So I am going to writing about a special day.
>>
I can’t think about the fondest custom in Korea, so I am going to writing about a special day.
I like the pork belly day called Sam-Guyp-Sal day in Korea.

>>I like the Pork Belly Day called Sam-Guyp-Sal day in Korea.

It is going to be held every march 3th.
>>
It is held every March 3th.
That’s because pronunciation of 3 is the same as ‘Sam’ in Korea.
>>That’s because the pronunciation of 3 is the same as ‘Sam’ in Korea.
I guess the day was made by a person who worked for selling meat in butcher’s shop.
>>
I guess the day was made by a person who sold meat in a butcher’s shop.
And it has been spread by others because most of Korean likes to eat pork belly.
>>
And it has been spread by others because most of Korean people like to eat pork belly.
Furthermore, Korean enjoys drinking alcohol especially So-Ju and many people think pork belly is the best partner with alcohol.
>>  
Furthermore, Koreans enjoy drinking alcohol especially soju, and many people think pork belly is best partnered with alcohol.
Actually, I don’t like to drink alcohol so I don’t agree with them since I prefer to drink coke with it.
>>
Actually, I don’t like to drink alcohol so I don’t agree with them since I prefer to drink Coke with it.
Anyways, during that day, most of the big markets and butcher’s shop is going to be selling it with a discounted price at least 20 % up to maximum 50 %.
>>
Anyways, during that day, most of the big markets and butcher’s shops sell it at a discounted price at least 20 % up to maximum 50 %.
Hence, I will buy it a lot on special event and save it in refrigerator.
>>Hence, I will buy a lot of it on a special event and save it in a refrigerator.
My high school friend who has meat shop told me if I put pork belly into noodles while I am boiling it, the taste would be better.
>>
My high school friend who has a meat shop told me if I put pork belly into noodles while I am boiling it, the taste would be better.
Thus, I will try cooking as an experiment.
>>
Thus, I will try cooking this as an experiment.
I hope my friend gave me an good advice without fake.
>>
I hope my friend gave me an good advice without faking it.
That\'s because, even if I buy meats with discount, it is expensive.

>>That\'s because, even if I buy meat with a discount, it is expensive.

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