Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

Good morning [이름]! Nice writing! I changed some words in your sentences. I hope it will help.

And also, please check the vocabulary words that might be useful in your writing.

1. respectively

2. fluctuate

3. equal

4. among

~~Teacher May~~

The most higher group in this graph is the Petrol and Oil and their rates are from 35 quadrillion units to over 45.

>> The highest groups shown in this graph are Petrol and Oil and their rates are from 35 quadrillion units over 45, respectively.

The rates often change lower or higher from 1980 to 1995, however, these are raised gradually after 1995.

>> The rates fluctuated from 1980 to 1995, however, these were raised gradually after 1995.
 The coal fuel and Natural gas fuel are approximately same but the before one is higher than another fuel in the end.

>> The coal fuel and the natural gas fuel are almost equal but the first one is higher than the last fuel.
 Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower, these three groups have very similar rates.

>> The three groups - Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydropower - have very similar rates.

They were same rate of lower than 5 units at 1980 but the prospect of these is different at the end, 2030.

>> They have equal rates of lower than 5 units in 1980 but the prospect of these is different in 2030.
 The nuclear will be higher over 5 and that\'s the highest level in this three groups.

>> Nuclear will be over 5 higher and that will become the highest level among the three groups.

The Solar/Wind energy is second and then the Hydropower is the last one.

>> Solar/Wind energy is the second and Hydropower is the last.

The last one is even lower than it\'s first rate.

>> The last one is even lower than its first rate.
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Large cities can administer the greening policy like planting a tree. I think this plan would be helpful in the city.

>> CORRECT