67. Homework

Whew, thank you for composing this paragraph, Jason~

So far, I have not experienced being called by these companies^^

However, phishing and pharming are what I am totally scared of.

See you^^

Q. In the era of SNS and the Internet, should people make more of an effort to keep some things private?
>>CORRECT!
Following the improvement of internet services and SNS, plenty of private information also has been spread on the web site.
>>Following the improvement of Internet services and SNS, plenty of private information has also spread on a number of websites.
Although people didn\'t allow or agree to use their personal information such as phone number, address, e-mail, age, gender, and something else, they might have an experience, at least once, to received phone call from the insurance companies as telephone marketing.
>>Although people didn\'t allow or agree to use their personal information such as phone number, address, e-mail, age, gender, and something else, they might have an experience, at least once, to receive a phone call from insurance companies as telephone marketing.
And then I think it is the worst case using their face or body as a composite photograph, which is replaced part of their body on an advertisement poster only for the adults.
>>And then I think it is the worst case to use their face or body as a composite photograph, which replaces a part of a body on an advertisement poster only for adults.
Furthermore, they are never known about that situation since they didn\'t contract with the company.
>>Furthermore, they never know that situation since they didn\'t sign a contract with the company.
That’s why people should make more of an effort to keep some things private.
>>CORRECT!
First, they reduce to post their pictures on the internet.
>>First, they must reduce posting their pictures on the Internet.
Second, they fill in minimum information only to enroll a homepage.

>>Second, they should fill in only a minimum amount of information when registering in a homepage.

 If it is possible, they should better put id and passwords only.
>> If it is possible, they should better put ID and passwords only.
Third, they have gotta stop using auto-update and auto-upload service to prevent their leaking personal data even if those actions give them little bit troublesome.
>>Third, they have got to stop using auto-update and auto-upload service to prevent them from leaking their personal data even if those actions make them a little bit troublesome.
Nevertheless their effort for protecting their information, it will be spread by the companies which are already bought private data from hackers.
>>Nevertheless their effort for protecting their information, it will be spread by the companies which have already bought private data from hackers.
On the contrary their effort for protecting information, private data will be spread by the companies which are already bought from hackers.
>>In contrast to their effort in protecting information, private data will be spread by these companies.
However, at least, if they try to do the things that I mentioned, I think leaking information will be being reduced since white hackers have been improving protection services and share it for the people.

>> However, at least, if they try to do the things that I mentioned, I think leaking information will be being reduced since white hackers have been improving protection services and share it to the people.